Some of you probably remember this story...its being edited as I retyped so it will make a lot more sense.
Chapter One: The Move To Planet Blanc
(It was after when Deuce disappeared into the wormhole after Ace's fight with him. They decided to move to Blanc. But before they did. They had to say their final farewells to Zadavia since she is leaving back to Freling with Optimatus.)
Ace: Too bad Zadavia's gone guys.
Tech: I know, chief. It will be hard without her here.
Ace: It was a fun ride.
Tech: Yup. We'll miss her very much, Ace.
Tweetums: I'm gonna be your new orginizer! Yay!(Happily)
Ace: That's right. Tweetums is gonna guide us now.
(Lexi enters the room wearing her earphones on, grooving and jumping like what she usually does all the time since their first mission.)
Lexi: What's going on in here guys?(She said as she turned her music off.)
Zadavia and Optimatus should be happily together again. I hope.
Duck: I'm not listening to you,Tweetums.
Tweetums: Oh yeah? Well you should. Zadavia said to keep an eye on you mostly and you have to listen to whatever I say or else you will have to clip my yellow toe nails and change my diaper and sing my national anthem and eat leaves. Got it?
Duck: I don't want to cut your yellow toe nails. ( Complaining.)
( He hurries to his room and starts packing.)
Ace: Where did Duck go?
Tweetums: He probably didn't want to cut my yellow toe nails.
Ace: Probably not.
Duck: So...are we ready to go? Are we??
Tech: Yes. I have been working on this invention all night and day yesterday after the battle with Deuce. So...to make things really quick to pack...I made the mover-560. It packs anything that is really big like our HQ or something small like a crumb.
Ace: Wow. Can we use it now?
Tech: unfortunalty, not yet. I need to charge it so we can pack our whole entire HQ and unpack it on Blanc.
Rev: It-was-my-idea.
Tech: Yes. Rev also helped me here and their but I mostly did it all.
Lexi: Very impressive you guys.
Tech/Rev: Thank you.
Tech: She was talking to me!
Rev: no she was talking to me!
Lexi: No! Did you hear me say,"you guys" Right?
( Tech and Rev looked at each other in a I just realized-type look.)
Tech: Anyway, I'm going to charge the mover 560. Come see.
( The other loonatics follow Tech into his lab/his room. When they looked it is the size of a pillow. It is a rectangular-type shape. It was black with green lines with a yellow button and a red button.)
Ace: What do the buttons mean, Tech?
Tech: The yellow one means unpack and the red one means pack.
Ace: I see.
Duck: How many things can it hold?
Tech: A lot of things.
Duck: like?
Tech: Like. Our HQ.
Duck: Can you pack the whole world?
Tech: Okay. Now you're just being silly.
Duck: No im serious.
Tech: No. Not something that big. Like i said before...from a pin to a giant building like the old empire strikes building. It can't go bigger or smaller than that.
Duck: Can it pack people?
Tech: No just items.
( Tech leaves the machine to charge. Everybody leaves out of Tech's lab.)
Lexi; Thanks for showing us, Tech. I think its good.
Tech: Your welcome and thank you, Lexi.
Lexi: No problem.
( She says as she is the last one to leave.)
- One Hour Later-
Tweetums: okay has everybody packed yet?
Ace: Yes, we have all packed.
Tweetums: Off to Blanc.
Rev: Is-it-ready-Tech?
Tech: Yes. Ready?
Rev: Yup.
( Tech hooks up the mover 560 to the nearest plug-in.)
Tech: Okay. Everybody out of the HQ. Grab your stuff too.
( The loonatics and Tweetums got out with their stuff. The reached the exit outside.)
Duck: Well...now what?
Tech; We get into the ship.
( They waited in the ship. As they see the HQ shrink into the mover 560 in a flash.)
Duck: I'm speechless.
Tech: Off to Blanc.
Tweetums: We need to go.
( Tech grabs the move 560 and puts it into the ship as it took off.)
-3 hours later-
Ace: We are here.
The End Of Chapter 1.
-- Edited by steve123 on Saturday 8th of August 2009 05:02:43 PM
( Once the loonatics landed on Blanc. The door opened. Tech was the first person to get out of the ship, he carried the mover 650 in his hands.)
Tech: Where should I put this?
Tweetums: Anywhere I guess. ( Tech nodded and walks five minutes away from the ship. What he was looking at is a giant field, that gladly wasn't that far from Tweetums' palace. Tech pushed the yellow button on the mover 650 and ran as fast as he could to the ship. Once he got to the ship, they watched where Tech putted the mover 650. The mover 650 started to shake. Then it started to grow big into the loonatics' headquarters. The windows were popping and the HQ got bigger and taller until it was its normal size.)
Tech: Wow. If you were in there. You would've been dead.
Duck: Well yeah, being stuffed in there. ( The loonatics jump out of the ship. They walk towards their HQ. The door automatically opens.)
Ace: I got to hand it to ya, Tech. Good job.
Tech: Thanks, Ace.
Ace: Anytime. ( The loonatics took their stuff to their HQ. They took the elevator up. The door opened and they see their HQ. It looks like that it hasn't been touched. Everything looks normal.)
Lexi: Seems like our HQ hasn't been destroyed. I can't believe it actually fit in that thing.
Tech: I know. I think its my favourite invention so far.
Duck: Yeah. Techies real cool. ( Tech looks at duck in a evil glare. The alarm rings.)
Computer: Message alert. Message alert.
Ace: What is it. computer?
Computer: Message from unknown.
Ace: Read the message. ( The computer screen lit up with a green line that was moving down as the computer started talking.)
Computer: Dear Loonatics: I wanted to send this letter before i left. I hope you have been a good boy Duck-
Duck: pst. Ya sure. ( The computer continued the message.)
Computer: Probably not. Anyways, i indeed will miss you all. I went to a oracle after you left and after we landed back in freling. He said that there is going to be a lot happening across the universe, but i don't believe him. If he really is telling the truth, contact me immediately-sincerely Zadavia. Ace: An oracle, eh? I don't know if that was even true. I doubt she ran into an oracle. Is that it computer?
Computer: Yes, Ace. All done. Bye.
Duck: Weirdo.
Ace; Yeah. We better keep a watch out for these ''oracle'' guys.
Tech: i heard they are really intelligent. They can see what is going to happen in 100 years from now.
Rev: Whoa. That-is-one-thing-i-forgot.
-Six hours later- ( It is six-thirty. The loonatics are doing there usuall things. Ace is teaching Rev how to meditate. Tech is laying on the couch, building another invention. Duck is watching t.v. Slam is lifting weights and Lexi is listening to her mp3. What could go wrong? Then the loonatics hear a gunshot.)
End Of Chapter 2.
-- Edited by steve123 on Monday 10th of August 2009 03:43:07 PM
( All of the six loonatics jumped as soon as they heard the gunshot. They look out the window as they see kids playing with a play gun that sounds like a gunshot.)
Ace: Are you guys thinking what i was thinking?( The rest of the loonatics rolled their eyes and stared at each other.)
All: Nah! ( The loonatics were on second away from the couch until they heard a gunshot and a scream.)
Lexi: What was that?! ( The loonatics see a figure running away from the kids like he did something to them. But they were still alive.)
Ace: Rev! Cut in front of him! ( Rev jumped out of the window and flew over to see where the figure went.)
Ace: Alright lets go, loonatics! ( The loonatics put on their via jet-packs as they exit out to catch up to Rev.)
Tech: I wonder who we are after this time.
Lexi: Yeah. Better not be one of those criminals that are below the super-types. I mean those guys are boring.
Duck: I hope he is not one of those guys who think they are going to take over the city, or the planet. Eh! I hate those guys!
Ace: Enough talkin' Duck and let's catch up!
Duck: Sorry.
Ace: It's okay, but lets go. ( The loonatics lower down in their jetpacks until they see the dark figure below them. Rev came in front of the figure. The figure stopped as soon as he saw Rev,then he turned around as the other loonatics surrounded him completely.)
Ace: What's up, doc?
????: Nothing much, loonatics! ( As he pulled something out of his pocket.)
Lexi: What's that in your pocket, mister!
????: Oh, nothing. Just coughing gas!( He spreaded it all over where the loonatics were standing. The loonatics put their arms in front of their faces to protect them from smoke in their faces. When the smoke cleared. He disappeared.)
Duck: Where did he go?
Ace: i don't know, Duck.
Tech: Hey, check this out you guys. I found something.
Rev: What-is-it? ( Tech looks at the object and thinks of what it is.)
Tech: Its a pill?
Duck: A pill that how people will feel better, type pill? Or a pill that Slam or Rev use when before they go to sleep? ( Rev and Slam give Duck an"i am going to kill you" type look. They folded their arms as Slam growled.)
