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Date: Dec 16, 2009
Island of No Return Chapter 1-2
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Author's Note: XD Yea Sorry I know my punctuation is horrible let alone my writing skills but heres the thing I am not good with this story in terms of the beginning but yea Also its 10 till 3 so yea I am goin to bed XD And I think if I know Icy Icy is missing from the loonatics at one point right? eh Ill go with it! Other's OC's are (C) To them! 
I will take critiques but no flamesChapter 1

 

 

The wind blew across the lake which made small waves while the sky blue with clouds of different sizes appeared. It was sunny a rare time for Acmetropolis. In the heart of the city stood the tall metal building with a green glowing sphere. The meeting room section was empty, except for a couple of touch-screen tablets around Tech’s side of the table. A couple of rooms down, Slam was in the kitchen taking whatever edible thing he can from the refrigerator, cabinet, and pantry and shoving it down his mouth. Ace and Lexi were both outside talking about there last battle. Duck was in his chamber sleeping while his head and arms where on the floor and the rest of his body on the bed. “Why Misty Breeze you shouldn’t wear make-up. It’s messing with perfection,” the duck mumbled in his sleep. Tech was in his laboratory also asleep on one of his keyboards, while mumbling an equation he was working on earlier.

Just than his doors opened and a dark figure was standing in the middle of the two sliding doors. The skinny figure had cast a straight shadow on the ground and over Tech’s face. Just than the figure’s eyes grew red and it slowly walked towards Tech. As it got closer, Tech twitched a little causing the little lamp next to him fall over and revealed the figure as Rev. Rev quickly blinked revealing his green eyes as he got closer and closer, he reached for a small device above the keyboard and managed to grab it. Tech then moved around a little Rev grinding his teeth, a trickle of sweat rolled down his forehead. He than quickly moved back, and turned around quietly. As he made his way to the two doors some pens fell to the floor behind Rev. Rev than quickly turned around and saw the seat was empty. Beginning to panic Rev gulped and turned around only to see Tech’s golden eyes.

“I believe you have something of mine feather ball,” the canine said putting his right hand paw up.

Rev quickly hid the device behind him.

“What-are-you-talking-about-Tech-I-have-nothing-of-yours-why-would-I-wanna-steal-from-you-you-are like-my-best-friend-”

Before Rev could finish Tech growled at him his eyes squinting. With a blank look on his face, Rev took off.

“REV!?! WHY YOU LITTLE GOOD FOR NOTHING.” Tech yelled as his eyes grew bright green and he ran out the door chasing Rev.

Tech tried catching up to the road runner as they ran all around the tower. Through doors , chambers, training rooms.

However it didn’t last long till Rev tripped over a random object on the floor. He tried to get up but Tech literally jumped on top of them which caused a loud “CRACK.”

They both looked at each other than down at Rev’s hands which held a once new designers tablet, now a pile of metal, wires, and loose screws. Tech than grind his teeth and looked back up at Rev.

“OK now Tech I can see that you’re angry but I--ACK!!!!

Suddenly the alarms began to go off and the red lights started flickering on and off.

Ace appeared on the room’s screen.

“Tech Rev we need you--guys--” as the leader was now confused to why Tech is strangling Rev by the neck.

“150000 dollars, and you crush it I didn’t even use it and you crush.”

“Uh guys-

“Well-Technically it broke when you-ACKKK

“Guy-

“Well you were the one who stole it to begin with”

“Gu-

“But I-

“HEY,” Ace yelled as the two looked up at the screen and blinked, “IF YOU HAVEN’T NOTICED WE HAVE A CODE RED AND YOU TWO ARE ACTING LIKE 2 YEAR OLD OVER A STUPID TOY, NOW GET UP AND HEAD TO THE MEETING ROOM.” As soon as the screen went blank Tech got up and walked towards the meeting room mumbling bad things under his breath. Rev than followed behind him.

Chapter 2

In the meeting room all of the Loonaitcs from the city sat on one side, while the sky patrol sat on the left. Rev finally came in through the door his head down. As he looked up he felt even worse seeing all the his members sitting in their seats hands crossed giving the look Rev knew was considered their angry look. Lexi with her left brow up, HC rolling his eyes up shaking his head, Hip Hop with his eyes squinting and nose crinkling up, and Zadavia standing at the front of the table in front of the screen.

“Thank you for finally joining us Rev..I never would expect tardiness from you please take you seat..”

Rev walked up and took a seat right in between Sapphire and Joy. Rev quickly looked over at Tech who still had an angry look on his face and growling a little while Cassidy tried calming him down.

“Now Loonatics I ha-

“Wait a minute Zadavia we have a problem,” Stacy interrupted, “where’s Duck?”

“He is still sleeping,” Ace said in an angry tone, “Lexi-

“I am on it,” Lexi said getting up from the table as everyone watched her exit out into the hall.

Minutes later a bright pink flash appears in the hall and a screech is heard.

“YEEEOOOOWWWW,” Duck screams running into the room with his hands on his bottom.

“Must you do that every time.”

“Sit down Duck this is very important,” Zadavia ordered. As soon as everyone was seated, Zadavia than pulls up two photos of global mail deliverers on the screen. Falcon Wyatt, a blue/red/yellow falcon and Bill Fugate, a blue jay.

“As I said I have received these two files which include profiles and photos. It seems that these two young deliverers have been missing since last. They tried contacting the police but they lost contact with them.”

“Whoa Whoa Whoa, hold it here sis,” Duck interrupted, “why do we have to worry about these two disappearing birds, the police can handle that we are super heroes we have better things to do than this.”

“Because Duck, there have been a lot of people missing around here lately, and you’d be surprise what specifically is disappearing, Tech Randell, Stacy I had you guys do some research have you found anything?”

Tech remained still not moving. As Randell than spoke for him

“Yes we have Zadavia,” he said getting up along with Stacy.

“Stacy is about to show on the screen the last 20 citizens of Acmetropolis or tourists that have gone missing in the past 6 months.”

Stacy than pulled up all 20 people that have gone missing from Acmetropolis.

“As you can see all of them have something in common.”

“They all are missing,” Hip Hop said raising his hand.

Randell than put his hand on his face..

“Ok besides that. They are all birds and if that isn’t strange enough odd they always go missing when they head out towards the east off of Acmetropolis. So why is it only birds that are missing and why only in the east. It’s obvious there’s like some crazy bird villain out there and we need to stop them before we loose anyone else. I already notified the police and will not let anyone especially birds go towards that area”

“So your job loonatics is to go out there and find out who is behind this, Stacy has mapped out the coordinates to wear these birds are disappearing which should lead you to the culprit. Good Luck to all of you.”

“Alright team,” Ace said standing up, “let’s jet.” As the whole teams got up and head to the top to take off. In less than 5 minutes all had taken off except Tech, Cassidy, and Rev. Rev made his way up to Tech and decided to try an apologize to his friend.

“Hey-Tech-I-wan-

“Rev! Just shut up, you really did it this time, you are like a big child, it always has to be with what Rev wants, grow up.”

Tech turned away and began heading up towards Cassidy to take off.

“What-do-you-want-me-to-do.”

Tech getting really mad turned around and walked back,

“You know what I want you to do? Why don’t you just vanish, leave, bye bye, because right now I don’t even want to see your face at the moment.”

As soon as Tech and Cassidy left Rev opened up his arm controller which had a picture he took it out and looked at the photo of his love who had has also been missing.

“Icy. I really wish you were here, you’d give me the advice.”
He quickly put it back in and ran out the doors and opened his arms and began soaring through the sky.




-- Edited by Hip_Hop_Coyote on Thursday 17th of December 2009 12:57:22 AM

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OH MY GOOOOODDD I wanna read the rest!


I WANNA READ THE RESTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!

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Okay, you've peeked my interest! Keep it up! ;)


And yes, Icy went missing for a whole three years. At this point Rev would only think of her as a good friend though since he, Icy, and Tech grew up together. It wont be another couple of years until he and Icy start to grow feelings for each other.

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